Wednesday, August 24, 2011

"Searching for stardom"

Fire red hair. rebal without a cause.

Nights alone, dressed up with Nowhere to go.

Finally finds her Place in the world.

Recognized and Everywhere to go.

Fire red hair, now with a cause.  

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6 comments:

  1. TarynFahouryAugust 26, 2011 at 8:08 AM

    I really like this poem. I love your descriptive writing. It makes me want to see the picture you wrote about!

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  2. TiarakcAugust 26, 2011 at 8:16 AM

    i dig this! i am so urious about the picture...and who the picture was of. very well written!

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  3. ErynRAugust 26, 2011 at 8:19 AM

    I love how you chose to capitalize Nowhere, Place, and Everywhere. It's very stylistic and metaphorical. Also, I want to see this picture now!!

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  4. reillyhumphreyAugust 26, 2011 at 9:18 AM

    i liked how you started and ended your poem with the same line.

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  5. JayneanneAugust 27, 2011 at 2:12 PM

    This is very descriptive with a lot of intensity

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  6. McKennaAugust 28, 2011 at 11:21 AM

    i like how you used firey red hair very descriptive!

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